2014년 10월 26일 일요일

Confirmation (week8)

1. What is my thesis?
Parents should teach children about those safety, security and ethical issues and should not ban children from using the internet.
2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using articles and writing, which is written by a publisher.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments have an evidence. I support my opinion based on only the evidence. Also, I use some information with emotion. 
My Confirmation

First,If parents ban children from the internet, they lost the trust from their children. In fact, the one thing that every parent should give their child is trust. Without trust, children will never have the confidence in himself or herself to be true to others. When parents switch off the internet, children will find ways to get on it. Because they feel it is unfair. So they may not be doing it in front of you but they will always be trying to find the passwords, keys and ways to get themselves on it secretly. It isn't like if parents shut off the internet at their home, their children have it gone out of their life. Children can get on the internet at other places like school or a friend's place or even internet cafes. After all, parents and children will not trust each other. Thus, parents also respect their children`s thoughts and behaviors.

Second, Children are missed a chance to get information and educate. The internet is a beneficial tool for children to improve their reading skills and has a huge resource of information . Think of it as the Library. Just like there are good books, bad books and inappropriate books, so has the internet. There is every reason for our children to be on the internet. Actually, children can explore new ideas, gather information for the topics that interest them; they can look for more references for what have been taught at school; find easier methods to understand a topic and they can virtually travel the world understanding multi cultures and histories. They also get entertainment in the form of videos and games and then there are their chances to communicate and stay in touch with their families and friends. When parents switch off the internet for them, all this is hindered. So, parents are disadvantaging their children in a skill that they need to survive in today's world.

Actually, except these, there are lots of evidence. Using the internet is useful for people, especially children. Because there are many things they can do with the internet. For example, they can study a homework or search the information through the internet. And, they can communicate with their friends or relatives. If they use it not excessively, it can help them variously.

http://www.wordsnneedles.com/2014/05/5-reasons-why-you-should-not-ban.html

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